Wednesday, August 18, 2010

First Song

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I am the kind of person who makes up songs in my mind all the time. Like today, when I was in the exam, and I found the name Maurice somewhere, I found myself making up a song about a pixie named Maurice who had only one wing. hah. don’t worry, my exam went amazing though. =P

So, last night I finally wrote a song on paper. It was a huge improvement from the mind. haha. Here it is, the first draft. It’s called “Dreaming about our story”.

 

Boy, aren’t you like

all the other guys, in the world.

Judging by your looks

you’re every girls,  Prince Charming,

oh how alarming

that you never accept who you are.

You try to be someone you are not.

But I know, that inside you’re just a simple guy!

 

I’m always dreaming about our story, and how it would end.

Bet you never even think about me, besides a friend.

I’m always dreaming about our story, and how it would end.

Bet you never even think about me, besides a friend.

 

And every time you’re near, I get so nervous

I can almost her my heartbeat faster.

Yet I never realized how much

I’d miss you when you were gone.

Leaving me behind, only with the memories

where you and I smile.

Talking ‘bout the god times and now you’re so far away

I can’t even count the miles.

 

I’m always dreaming about our story, and how it would end.

Bet you never even think about me, besides a friend.

 

I feel like I’ve lost everything

And I’m pretty sure you won’t even realize.

That I felt something for you.

You just keep dating the wrong girls,

getting your heart broken all the time.

When are you ever gonna realize,

that the girl of your dreams could be me.

 

I’m always dreaming about our story, and how it would end.

Bet you never even think about me, besides a friend.

 

Don’t you see the sparks that fly?

Don’t you see it like the clear blue sky?

Don’t you ever see my eyes, filled with hope.

Don’t you?

 

I’m always dreaming about our story, and how it would end.

Bet you never even think about me, besides a friend.

 

ok, So I know that this song needs LOADS of more work. Any criticism is more than welcome.

PS, I’m not going lovey dovey. OK, maybe a little. But this blog is still gonna be non-vai, I’ll come up with something more interesting soon.

3 comments:

  1. alhey, that song is really nice. but i feel really sad after reading that. really nice though!

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  2. naaaaiicee! i can't do rhymes. but yeah i used to do this. or should i say this used to happen to me too. when i was crushing on some dude. wow...i was so poetic then. not anymore though, sadly.

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  3. @ieccco, thanks. yeah, those days were pretty sad.

    @naina, I am all about rhyming. hehe. yeah, its a fun thing.

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